Evaluation 3 - Draft

What have you learned from your audience feedback?

When we first pitched our ideas to classmates and teachers, they seemed to be exciting at the prospec of having a party video. However there were a few concerns about how we would film the party scenes so we could create the illusion that 50+ were present when actually there were only 8. Also the mise en scene had to look effective/realistic and this was stressed by teachers and peers after our pitch. 

 Feedback from a variety of sources meant that i could take the advice from others and work on improving all pieces of work. I received feedback for my ancillary texts through different methods. This included Twitter, Blog posts, Facebook, Youtube. Through using the internet i could gain feedback on all ancillary texts form peers, teachers and the public. Overall my work has had a positive reception. However getting to the end result was not without changing a few of my original ideas/plans... 

     

Feedback from our teachers and verbal feedback from our peers was very useful when showcasing our draft ancillary texts. The feedback was very constructive especially with our video, where we originally had many different shots of 'party' scenes that didn't work too well. My digipak also received helpful feedback concerning the colour scheme that was completely changed in my final draft. From the feedback on our draft ancillary texts we could really appreciate how important feedback is order to have a fantastic end media product. After listening to the feedback on our draft we re-shot some of the scenes with the female lead singer in order for her lip-syncing to be perfect. We then started from scratch again on Final Cut because a different beginning and end wad needed. Otherwise the video looked very amateur. 

The bands Twitter account was created in the hopes that a range of feedback from the large variety of people could be received by people using the social networking site. However gaining feedback by using this site was slightly restricting because only the people who followed 'Intoxicated' could actually comment or even see the work. 

Another way the i could gain feedback especially on the music video was through blogger. Classmates and peers comented on the final video and presented there ideas to us.

We constructed an animatic in order to get an estimate of timings and camera shots. The feedback on our animatic storyboard helped us further to get precise timings and possible camera shots that could be achievable and realistic. Although we changed the order of camera shots, cut some out completely and added others, it was still a useful process. 

Our pitch enabled us to display our ideas to our classmates and teachers. Some initial concerns regarding, mise en scene, the amount of extras for the video and lighting issues where addressed to us so we could overcome the problems before we started filming. The feedback we received on our video from our peers was mostly positive and they thought the 'minimalistic party worked well.'

Evaluation 1 - draft

In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

In the early research and planning stages I researched current music video’s and the conventions they had so I could then match them to my on ancillary texts. I first chose to analyse Rita Ora’s ‘how we do’ music video.  The music genre was not really significant but the mise en scene of a party themed video definitely gave me inspiration. I wanted the music video to be ‘amplification’ meaning that no real performance of narrative would be present. In the video I wanted to re-create some of the party scenes in Rita Ora’s video as well as a Redlight Video I looked at to achieve this style of music video.

As well as finding music video’s that inspired me, I also came across a film named ‘Project X’. The film was targeted for young people aged 16-25 and features a young boy throwing a uncontrollable party. I really enjoyed the film and drew up some ideas e.g camera shots and casual costumes that could be used in my video. I also thought the idea of targeting a video towards people my own age would benefit me and would be something achievable. The films trailer features a similar dance genered song. From this, I could gain an appreciation of how short and precise the shots need to be in order to have a fast dance video that looks effective. In the final video I think the timing of shots worked really well and this is credited to the feedback on the draft. 

In both my Video and Digipak I wanted to have a consistent minimalistic theme that could develop dance music video conventions. Even though i went with a minimalistic approach that would challenge normal forms of this type of genre. I still kept short fast cuts in the music video that were necessary for a dance genre. 

 After looking at many different digiapaks including some that had busy artwork on the cover or a simple motif, I decided to stick with the minimalistic style because this would develop normal digipak’s that would be relased by a dance band or artist. I used the vibrancy of colour that is sometimes a necessary convention that is needed for a product to be attractive for a consumer.

I came across a band (similar to mine) called ‘Bitte Orca Dirty Projectors’ and used the same colour scheme as they had on their digipak cover. The colours (red and blue) worked well with the female and male members of the band. However I have again, developed the convention on having a title on the front cover of a digipak, by not including it on mine. This resulted in my digipak havng a ‘striking’ appearance.

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For both my ancillary texts I used the same location infront of a projector screen to create the backdrop. I found this useful because any background could be presented onto the screen. This is something i have seen in other mainstream music videos and therefore used it in our video. Making it look slightly more professional.

When trying to plan my album cover i researched many different bands similar to mine. The Pet Shop Boys album cover really displays the idea that 'less is more'. I liked it's simplicity and thought it would really stand out to a consumer. I took inspiration from their poses and contrasting facial expressions. As you can see with my band, their pose and expressions are similar to the style of the Pet Shop Boys.

Evalatuion 2 - draft

As far as creating a 'brand' for our band 'Intoxicated', i wanted to have an easily recognisable dance/elctro band. The digipak originally had a green colour scheme that was created by photographing the band infront of the projector screen used in the video. However i wanted to use real media products that could inspire me such as Bitte Orca Dirty Projector. 

The colours used are still bold but not as distracting as the bright green that i was originally going to use.

 The red and blue colour scheme on the Digipak and Advert suits the genders of the band and continues to keep a simplistic approach to my ancollary texts. I think the the colours would be recognisable, especially from a 'dance' band who, (judguing form my reasearch) don't use this minimalistic style and this was shown in our vidoe also.

The font used on both the my ancillary texts was intentionally used to match the simplistic approach and create a 'clean' professional look that could contrast to the bands casual style.

From the research and planning stages, it became apparent that the style of a band does attract people an in certain videos the male gaze was achieved by the artist/band wearing contemporary, revealing outfits. The outfits used in real media products would. The costume/style of our band is casual in order for all the ancillary texts to be, in a way 'timeless'. Without people really judging the band on what they look like or what/who they're wearing. 

By having the record label on the Advert people can recognise

 

I have created the concept of a 'star image' by having the girl in the video making direct eye contact with the audience by looking into the camera. She is also the only singer. The boy had the role of 'dj' and doesn't actually engage with the audience on either of my ancillary texts.